Authors using the Helix Review: Gary Briley

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As a part of our ongoing series looking at self-published writers who have used Helix Review, we interviewed Lulu author Gary Briley, who wrote the mystery novel: Stalemate. Helix, powered by The Book Genome project, allows authors to upload a manuscript and receive an incredibly in-depth analysis of the book.

Stalemate By Gary Briley

After artist Julia Storey is murdered by a hit and run, her journals reveal a secret life that her husband Nick realizes puts him, his son, sister and parents—away on one of their “trips to nowhere”—in the crosshairs of a vicious killer.

Police Detective Sam Oliphant focuses on Nick as the prime suspect. Nick pairs up with Oliphant’s reluctant partner, Olivia Barton, Nick’s first love, to rescue his parents, now held hostage by cohorts of Lupo, an organized crime boss. Their search leads them through a maze of betrayal and murder, and ultimately to revelations that send shock waves rattling through the Storey family and their construction business.


Tell us a bit about Stalemate

After artist Julia Storey is murdered by a hit and run, her journals reveal a secret life that her husband Nick realizes puts him, his son, sister and parents—away on one of their “trips to nowhere”—in the crosshairs of a vicious killer.  Police Detective Sam Oliphant focuses on Nick as the prime suspect. Nick pairs up with Oliphant’s reluctant partner, Olivia Barton, Nick’s first love, to rescue his parents, now held hostage by cohorts of Lupo, an organized crime boss. Their search leads them through a maze of betrayal and murder, and ultimately to revelations that rattle through the Storey family and their construction business.

How would you describe your writing style?

I like to present characters that are real, but not perfect, and involve them in authentic life situations, challenges they struggle to overcome; characters that the reader can identify with through their interactions and dialogue. I like to create a story with intrigue, and suspense that could happen to any of us.

Why did you decide to try Helix?

To compare my story and its development with others.

What were you able to learn from the Helix Review?

That my book falls well within the parameters of the genre, that my dialogue is probably better than most.

How do you plan to use the Helix information?

To achieve a better story structure.

What would you tell someone considering trying Helix?

It is well worth the money to see how your story compares to best sellers, and what is special about your book.

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